You can improve your blog by adding more words and details and maybe fix your capitalization.
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Sorry i didnt spell my words right in my last comment so here is another!... Good Job! But you might want longer paragraphs and more voice.
I think your blog needed to have longer postes and a little bit more voice into them .
I think you need to watch ou for glarring errors!!!
I think you could of spent more time researching. I also think you could have put more work into it
Something you could have improved on was the content of your posts. You could have spent more time researching your subtopics.
You can improve your blog by adding more words and details and maybe fix your capitalization.
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ReplyDeleteSorry i didnt spell my words right in my last comment so here is another!... Good Job! But you might want longer paragraphs and more voice.
ReplyDeleteI think your blog needed to have longer postes and a little bit more voice into them .
ReplyDeleteI think you need to watch ou for glarring errors!!!
ReplyDeleteI think you could of spent more time researching. I also think you could have put more work into it
ReplyDeleteSomething you could have improved on was the content of your posts. You could have spent more time researching your subtopics.
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